smartesthere's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness short part 1]

crap

total crap

1- use decant sound, make it sync with the movie

2-unless it a sprite movie, avoid the pixalited graphics- mixing the two rarely works

3)'big bad boss' was lame- make it LOOK evil, instead of a label

4) don't put 'vote 5' in the submission, or in the descrpition- it just drags it down even further

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Madness movie

[Madness Agony Trailer]

looks cool

whens the actual episode coming out?

also- telling people to 'vote 5' in your description dosent actually effect their voting- you're more likely to get higher scores if you actually describe your upload.
and
some people are actually more inclined to vote lower when you say that.

[Stick Practice]

weak ending

the weak ending needs to be fixed, try keeping the final fight going for a bit longer.

the rest of the animation is good, so i saved it!

[SageGaiGar!]

awesome

your friends made you do the right thing
well done!

[Madness God]

you were rigt when you said...

...that it still needs improvemnt

the sound was near perfect
(some blood splatter would be awesome)

but your main weakness is with the gun flashes;
try bigger white jagged/spiky shapes, and dont show them for as long

[Creature of night part 2]

music good

graphics bad
sound fx ok

it's a good idea, but can you spend more then 10 seconds on the drawings next time.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

I thought the drawings were good, screw you smartesthere. And you have not submited anything yet.

[EdgeVoid - Teaser]

not too good

could yo add a preloader, i'm unsure of when it's actually loaded.

the webpage said it was done, but the flash did nothing =(

[Mario of the Bricks]

could be better

it would be better as part of a series/comperlation of mario spoofs.

[Super Tree]

coool

i liked this little animation so much i just had to use 3 o's

this should be on the front page